HeyDan Development - Document Improvement

Example Document

The Bossotel Hotel

About Us Examples Original Document Improved Document Information & Cost
Staff Login
login:
passwd:
A picture of the Bossotel Hotel Lobby

The code that produces this website is nicely laid out and easy to work with & edit. The only difficulty encountered was trying to decipher what some of the more obscure sentences were trying to say.

Work Performed

All text, including menu items and footers, on the web-page were reviewed and edited, to produce a page more understandable and acceptable by Western readers. Spending more time could improve the content of this page further so that the English is perfect and the text sells the service more efficiently, but the simple improvements already made will certainly improve the acceptability of this site to foreign visitors.

  • Plural and singular words corrected.
  • Sentences rephrased to improve flow.
  • Obscure meanings and references clarified.
  • Grammar and tenses corrected.
  • New content proof read.

As discussed on our Levels Of Service page, varying amounts of time can be spent on proofing the improved content. Most customers prefer speedy proofing to save cost, so occasionally there may be some small errors in the content of this page. Customers tend to think that small mistakes are more acceptable compared to the errors in their original content.

Cost & Timing

The actual work to update the text on this particular page took approximately 20 minutes, including time to slow-read proof the new content. This means that it could be possible to improve up to 3 pages per hour at a price of 700bht per hour.

A discount of 50bht per hour can be given for including our logo, for at least 12 months, on any website page improved by us. Also, for an additional 50bht per hour, we can download your web-pages directly from your site, and upload them when complete.

Further Recommended Work

  • Improve additional website pages.
  • Introduce 'alternate text' tags for images and links.
  • Obscure email address, or introduce 'Contact Us' form to prevent SPAM.